I got the demo. ill check it out tonight. I probably will purchase it.
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I got the demo. ill check it out tonight. I probably will purchase it.
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Sounds good! Some reviews/feedback appearing now.Originally Posted by SilverBullet432
I got the demo. ill check it out tonight. I probably will purchase it.
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I will leave feedback for sure!
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Thanx. Very helpful left on Amazon as ratings/comments has a big effect on ratings and sales.
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Loved it. Highly positive review posted- looks like I was the first one to the party this time
Solid play, Will. It's definitely above average for the genre. Loved the pop-fiction references, and the slightly irreverent reader interaction. Watch out for too much explanation of why the hero does things a certain way as that could be easily overplayed, but in this case it worked very well for the way you told the story. I like that you didn't answer everything by the end- it only enhanced the realism for me. I look forward to reading more.
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Picked it up on kindle unlimited. I'll give it a read asap.
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Thanx. Much appreciated feedback. Like real life, things not always wrapped up in a neat ending and group hugs for all. But, it's also left it open to future developments, so I'm getting started on the next installment asap.Loved it. Highly positive review posted- looks like I was the first one to the party this time
Solid play, Will. It's definitely above average for the genre. Loved the pop-fiction references, and the slightly irreverent reader interaction. Watch out for too much explanation of why the hero does things a certain way as that could be easily overplayed, but in this case it worked very well for the way you told the story. I like that you didn't answer everything by the end- it only enhanced the realism for me. I look forward to reading more.
- Will
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www.BrinkZone.com
LE/Mil specific info:
https://brinkzone.com/category/swatleomilitary/
“Those who do not view armed self defense as a basic human right, ignore the mass graves of those who died on their knees at the hands of tyrants.”
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Not much time for reading lately but I suppose I could make some time to give your story a shot. I'll go on Amazon soon and give it a go.
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Wow!
I will read it.
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Purchased.
I have rather large stack of papyrus to wade through for work, but will try and read it soon, and post a review.
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