Originally Posted by
SeriousStudent
Just the little jewels scattered through the story. It seems as if the writer has an axe to grind.
"the ugly reputation it earned the company "
"a caustic moniker for private security"
"the tarnished brand "
And of course, what the writer picked as the closing quote:
"Blackwater's notorious reputation will outlast its name,"
Maybe I am just overly sensitive. I just know that if I turned in something like that to my high-school journalism teacher *cough* 30 years ago *cough* I would have received a low grade and an order to re-write it. I would have also been asked if I was writing an editorial, or an straight-news story.
I think that many, many "news" stories you see today frequently erode that line. Just my opinion.
Thanks, and stay safe.
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